12 Aralık 2010 Pazar

A MARVELLOUS HUSBAND

Everybody want to a marvellous husband,because life is too short and to be happy is necessary a goog husband.The more comman characteterists people have,the more pleasan togetherness people have.
I want to a husband who will love me forever. He will show me understanding and respect when we argue. I want to a husband who will not shout at me and exaggearate events. If he is unjust and really loves me or fear losing me, he should undestand his mistake and offers an excuse. I want to a husband who will sympathize with my sorrow and say relaxing things to comfort me. I want to a husband who will value me and always whisper his love. My thoughts and ideas should be important for him;therefore I want to a husnand who will listen to me. I want to a husband who will be loyal to me and his eyes will not see other girls. I want to a husband who will not leave my hands both in the good and bad days.
I want to a husband who will accompany with me in my social life. If I’m bored with my works,he will take me to the cinema or another places to entartain or to relax. If I want to meet my girlfriends an evening, I want to a husband who will permit eagerly so that I will not want to be in a bad mood. When my friends come to our house, I want to a husband who will welcome them friendly. And while we are speaking, I want to a husband who will take care of our children. When I come from the school, I want to a husband who will help m efor cooking the meals and setting the table. When I’m busy with school works,andI f he has convenient time I want to a husband who will interest in homeworks of our children. I want to a husband who will answer our childrens’ necessities and desires properly. I want to a husband who will be responsible for children and me.
While Iam writing them, I think that do I want to a lot of things?? No.. I don’t want to many things. Who will not a this so husband?? To be happy and long a togetherness, these are compulsory and essential for relationship.

4 yorum:

  1. Everybody wants! to (a small grammar mistake )

    There ara so many spelling mistakes but I think

    it does not matter.I like it.Organisation is

    good

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  2. hi afrasu
    your organization and contend are really nice. I like your essay, but there are some gramatical mistakes. Instead of these sentences ," If he is unjust and really loves me or fear losing me, he should undestand his mistake and offers an excuse", you could have written like that: he is injust and he really loves me or fears of losing me, he should understand his mistakes and offer an excuse. Apart from these small mistakes, your essay is beautiful:) thanks for essay.

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  3. hi afrasu :D your essay is good ,but I found some gramatical and writing mistakes.For example : gooG husband , he should undestand his mistake and offerS , I want TO a husband .Excluding these small mistakes , I liked your husband shape and your essay :D

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  4. hi afrasu :D your essay is good ,but I found some gramatical and writing mistakes.For example : gooG husband , he should undestand his mistake and offerS , I want TO a husband .Excluding these small mistakes , I liked your husband shape and your essay :D

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