Traveling from any place to place is very calming for people ,I think when you see many different things, there you learn a lot of new information.However only people don't travel for calming.Some factors determine why people travel to different places.
People works a lot througt all year , and want to rest.To relieve they sometimes preper to travelling.To rest is important for people.Whatever happen , travel.Because when they travel another places they relax and works harder next year.By relaxing , they become happier and this happiness reflects their surroundings.
Travelling sometimes is compulsory for people.For excample due to their job they have to leave from their house.Because they must continune thier lives without another people's help they have to earn money.Some people travel to earn money or progress in their job.For example seminar arranged for carreer.People who want to raise in their job go to there,so they have a lot of information about their job.Sometimes they take a certificate from this seminars and so they ar accepted easily by many company, because they are more ahead than other people.
To some up generally people travel because of these factories.I think traveling is not hard for you if you want to reach your aim.
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Essay is good.But it is a little bit easy I think.It should be developed and also there are some basic errors like ''excample''.
YanıtlaSilhi afra,
YanıtlaSilHowever only people don't travel for calming.-however,people don'T travel only for calming.
.To rest is important for people.-resting is more suitable ı think.
Whatever happen-happens
they relax and works harder next year.thay relax and work much harder for the next year.
Travelling sometimes is compulsory.sometimes travelling.
who want to raise-who want to make progress.
many company-many companies.
factories.-factors.except for these it is ok.