I have been to many cities but I didin't enjoy those places as I enjoyed Ordu and Denizli.They are two cities that people get accustomed to their cities and their lives.I love both cities in different ways.Altough they are completely different from each other, there are some similarities between them.
Ordu has many properties and thanks to these properties Ordu seperates from Denizli. Firstly, it has sea that you charm with wonderful blue colour.It is sometimes quite sometimes ill-tempered.This ill-tempered affects Ordu's people.We hear that people of The Black Sea are very quick tempered, but thanks to unique beauty of the forests this bad temper decreases.Magnificent harmony of blue and green relieves people. Ordu is a city which is sat in the middle of The Black Sea Region, and it's climate is more different than Denizli.Due to its climate vegetables and fruits are not the same as Denizli's, because Ordu's weather is rainy vegetables and fruits which are grown by people like water, such as nut and tea. Also, climate affects houses.For example, houses are made from board in Ordu but denizli's houses are made from concrete.Due to landforms, transportation is hard. Thanks to passages, transportion's hardness decreases. Ordu is a small city and its some opportunities aren't enough.Finding o job is very hard. Ordu is not ideal for people who like entertainment.Finally, Ordu has a song.Everybody knows this song (Ordu's streams).This song and their accent is known by everyone.
Besides all these differences , Ordu and Denizli have some common properties. Firstly, both of them have universities.Thanks to these universities there are a lot of students in Ordu and Denizli.Ordu has some shopping malls like Denizli.People go to there for some reasons such as passing time, but both of them aren't cheap unfortunately.
Shortly, it is beautiful to see different places.These places can sometimes be similar and sometimes different.They are very different in appearance and culture,but in both places people adopt their lives.
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Dear Afra,
YanıtlaSilGood description but with some errors of vocabulary, grammatical and spelling. If you watch out these and also include abit more description, this essay can be improved much.
See the suggestions I make in the text.
"ORDU AND DENİZLİ
I have been to many cities but I did???in't enjoy those places as (much as) I enjoyed Ordu and Denizli.???(These)They are two (different) cities (with different features; however ...) that people get accustomed to their cities and their lives.I love both cities in different ways.Altough they are completely different from each other, there are some similarities between them.
??Ordu has many properties and thanks to these properties Ordu ???seperates from Denizli. Firstly, it has sea that ???you charm(s) with (its) wonderful blue colour.It is sometimes quite sometimes ill-tempered.This ill-tempered (nature of the sea)affects Ordu's people.We hear that people of The Black Sea are very quick tempered, but thanks to unique beauty of the forests this bad temper decreases.Magnificent harmony of blue and green relieves people. Ordu is a city which is (situated)sat in the middle of The Black Sea Region, and (its)it's climate is more different ??than Denizli.Due to its climate vegetables and fruits are not the same as Denizli's, because Ordu's weather is rainy vegetables and fruits which are grown by people like water, such as nut and tea. Also, climate affects houses.For example, houses are made from board in Ordu but ??denizli's houses are made from concrete.Due to landforms, transportation is hard. Thanks to passages, transportion's hardness decreases. Ordu is a small city and ??its some opportunities aren't enough.Finding ??o job is very hard. Ordu is not ideal for people who like entertainment.Finally, Ordu has a song.Everybody knows this song (Ordu's streams).This song and their accent (are)is known by everyone.
Besides all these differences , Ordu and Denizli have some common properties. Firstly, both of them have universities.Thanks to these universities there are a lot of students in Ordu and Denizli.Ordu has some shopping malls like Denizli.People go ???to there for some reasons such as passing time, but both of them aren't cheap unfortunately.
Shortly, it is beautiful to see different places.These places can sometimes be similar and sometimes different.They are very different in appearance and culture,but in both places people adopt (to life styles) their lives"
I liked your essay but it should include more descriptive sentences ıf you want you can do better than this and I want to show you an error ''didin't '':)
YanıtlaSilhi honey:) your essay is good. I laught(ordu's streams) this is English jokes ha:))) there are some small mistakes (this song and accent is)..
YanıtlaSilı like your essay too, but ı think you don't write enough description sentences of course it is not problem for a friend like you who can do everything if she wants
YanıtlaSilı like your essay but it has some mistakes.
YanıtlaSilas I enjoyed Ordu and Denizli-as....as.
that you charm with wonderful blue colour-that charms you with...
which is sat -is located.
This song and their accent is -are.that is enough:)