12 Aralık 2010 Pazar

A MARVELLOUS HUSBAND

Everybody want to a marvellous husband,because life is too short and to be happy is necessary a goog husband.The more comman characteterists people have,the more pleasan togetherness people have.
I want to a husband who will love me forever. He will show me understanding and respect when we argue. I want to a husband who will not shout at me and exaggearate events. If he is unjust and really loves me or fear losing me, he should undestand his mistake and offers an excuse. I want to a husband who will sympathize with my sorrow and say relaxing things to comfort me. I want to a husband who will value me and always whisper his love. My thoughts and ideas should be important for him;therefore I want to a husnand who will listen to me. I want to a husband who will be loyal to me and his eyes will not see other girls. I want to a husband who will not leave my hands both in the good and bad days.
I want to a husband who will accompany with me in my social life. If I’m bored with my works,he will take me to the cinema or another places to entartain or to relax. If I want to meet my girlfriends an evening, I want to a husband who will permit eagerly so that I will not want to be in a bad mood. When my friends come to our house, I want to a husband who will welcome them friendly. And while we are speaking, I want to a husband who will take care of our children. When I come from the school, I want to a husband who will help m efor cooking the meals and setting the table. When I’m busy with school works,andI f he has convenient time I want to a husband who will interest in homeworks of our children. I want to a husband who will answer our childrens’ necessities and desires properly. I want to a husband who will be responsible for children and me.
While Iam writing them, I think that do I want to a lot of things?? No.. I don’t want to many things. Who will not a this so husband?? To be happy and long a togetherness, these are compulsory and essential for relationship.

10 Aralık 2010 Cuma

alternative medicine-opinion essay-

What is non-conventional medicine?? Have you an idea about this medicine?? Nonconventional medicine “a wide range of therapeutic resources that involves all health systems, diverse approaches, knowledge and beliefs incarporating plant, mineral based medicines and that is different from health systems. Some people think that this is can be dangerous and not agree using non-conventional medicine, but in my opinion, if you fallow advices of your doctor truely, using alternative medicine in addition to health system is not dangerous.
There are some benefist alternative medicine. While antibiotics solve lives of people, they sometimes don’t solve some resurgence of germs that appear in new forms that do not respond to conventional therapies. Therefore alternative medicine is rising between people. Even doctors have begun to recommend natural herbal therapies to treat both daily complaints and serious illnesses. Sometimes people complain about job strees, diet or sleeping habits. Instead of applying druggless, using natural herbal medicine is the best way our body. Because herbal medicine is only natural and have not a bad effect against our body.
People say that alternative medicine is not benefit for our body. Yes… this is can be harmful, but when??!! When people reject conventional medicine, they may not see a benefit for their serious illnesses. If people who are diagnosed with cancer,weight problems, heart disease and blood pressure only use herbal medicine, this is very bad a situation, because these ilnesseses serious illnesses. Only herbal medicine is not enough. We think that herbal medicine is non-conventionel medicine’s friend.
Briefly, there are both pros and cons of using conventional medicine. People should be knowledgeable about the functions and effects of non-conventinal medicine. If you use non-conventionel medicine truely, it is not harmful for your body

24 Ekim 2010 Pazar

a paragraph about two films

I saw some scenes where individuals of film faced many difficulties in their life both Angela’s Ashes and Miracle Worker. For example their newborn daughter died and then a few more kids died in Angela’s Ashes. I think these scenes were emotional secenes. Frank and his brother picked coal from the street and Frank got sick from his eyes but fortunately recovered. In Miracle Worker Helen was a deaf and blind girl, therefore she didn’t communicate with people. Characters had a strong character in both films. Instead of escaping, they struggled with handicaps; for example Helen’s parents seek a woman who would help their daughter. Thanks to her love and persistance, the woman opened a new window for Helen. These films were emotional and real film but there are some differences. For example , we saw a poor family whose money wasn’t enough for them in Angela’s Ashes, but we saw a rich family where they lived comfortly in The Miracle Worker.

20 Mayıs 2010 Perşembe

Process Essay

Wedding Ceremony

In our Turkey,any wedding ceremony may be interesting and funny.During preperations for wedding,there are excitement and tension and also there are some rules such as calling neighbours and relatives,sending invitations.There are some rules you have to observe.
Firstly,before the wedding ceremony,bride and her many frineds gather to entertainment and to say goodbye to singleness.They eat,drink and laugh all night.This party öis relaxiation for bride with her friends.They speak about many things which are generally abuse,because they are very excited.

Then bride and her friends go to the hairdresser to see beauty.It can be little stressful ,becuse looking beautiful is the most important thing for the bride.Bride’s sibliys,mother and her intimate acauointances come to her’s near.Long and tiring day pass fort hem ,but the ends beautifully.

The most turmail time is wedding time.Everbody look forward to coming bride and groom.At finally, they enter the wedding holl very excitedly.Then a wedding song starts immediately,and couple dance in the front of people who look them curiously.After dance,music starts which entertains people very much.Everybody g oto scene for dancing.In passing time,wedding pie is eaten then guests give golden,presents to them

In conclusion,wedding ceremony is both entertaining and tiring day,but if it continues hapiily,this affects them positively.

ARGUMANTATIVE ESSAY

TEENAGE SUICIDE

The death of the young people is a tragic and sad occurance, so we should research why so many young people apply for suicide.We must realize that suicide among teenages is a real problem and on the increase.Many young people die because of many factories.

First,some personel factors are a real reason for them.Low self-esteem, drug/alcohal use , loss of boy/girlfriend, pour academic performance , loss of a close friend and depression are a fundamental factor for young person come across these difficulties and if they have a weak will, suicide is a easy escaping way for them.

Independent tharomatic events are an another example.Some things become true beyond the control of the individual, for example death or loss a close frien or relative , parental divorce, sudden Money problems.

Some people think that suicide is logical in the same situations.They said that struggling difficulties in life is not easy , so suicide is an escapement.However, life is difficult for everybody and everybody expose to some handicaps and difficulties .Instead of escaping from these, we must resist aganist life.We must stand on our own foot.

To summarize, many adolescents think seriously about killing themselves each year.We must realize this problem and learn sign and symptons.We say them that despite everything , life is beautiful.Even if bad things steal your golden shoes, you don’t lose your laughter.

Classification Essay

Environmental Pollution
Living in a beautiful place affects us positively,but we are exposed to some environmental pollution in Turkey.If we continue ignoring,we face some difficulties and this situation drags us into a word that cover with gray colour.Some factors accelatere it,such as water,air,soil environmantel pollution.

Water pollution is one of the word's worst forms of pollution.oil is usually spilled or leaked from land or rivers and flows from them to the sea or ocean.When ships transporting oil go to the sea,they sometimes leaks or cause ship crashes.oil also can affect some animals and their healty system.

Air pollution is also a worldwide polluter.Air pollution mainly comes from cars and industries.There are particles called hydrocarbons that settle or are washed down by rain from the air to the ocean.Toxic wastes are probably the most harmful forms of pollutions.

Soil pollution is another factor.For example when people go to the picnic,people sometimes ignore their surroundings and throw our their garbages indifferently.Then these garbages don't chem in the soil.Drugs are harmful for soil and these drugs damage to soil.

In conclusion,water,air and soil pollution are threatening for us.If we don't prevent about these pollutions,our world gets worse day by day.

CAUSE AND EFFECT ESSAY

THE CAUSES OF STRESS

Stres is defined as a force that deform a body.It is usually caused by any thing, such as from everyday life, things like tests, family problems and loss of job.Today students have many stres due to a lot of different reaons.There are many things that lad to stres like adopting a new place relationship, and peer pressure.

One of the main causes of stres is adopting to new life which we expose to manydifferent thing fot us.Everything is different.New peoples, new things and the most important is a new life welcomes to us.It is first time that we live outside of the family.They both protect us and supply which need some thing like Money.This is no longer applies in college an done of the first tasks that we should undertake all of themIf we accustomed to it, it is a big stres for us.

Another cause of college stres is relationship.Relationship stres can be caused by not living up to their partner’s expectation.Also it can be caused by individual liking some one very much but feeling is not mutual.

All of these aspects can cause students to feel like as if they carried all burden on their shoulders.Most students use alcohol , drug and tobacco to relieve stres.That’s why for some college students stress is very deforming for their bodies.

Moreover, the cause of stres is peer pressure .Some friends persuade you to doing something that you do not want to do.But you even if not doing it, you accept what they say.Because you are afraid of staying alone and beingrejected.Finally , pressure among students can cause stres.

In conclusion, any a student face some difficulties.Instead of damaging yourself , you struggle these.If you balance stres , it helps your life possitively.

1 Nisan 2010 Perşembe

Beijing (sample descriptive essay)

If you know China, you must know the Chinese capital city of Beijing, but what is China like? What is Beijing like? Maybe you donít know. China is too big for me to tell you about in this essay, but let me tell you about Beijing. Beijing has many famous places, such as Tiananmen Square, the Forbidden City, and the Great Wall.

Beijing is a beautiful city. It has many ancient buildings, and a lot of modern buildings. Beijing is the biggest city in the world. It has 16,808 square kilometers. Beijing is situated in the northwestern part of north China. To the west, the northwest, and the south, the city is surrounded by mountain ranges. The Great Wall is on the mountain ranges. To the northeast the ocean lies by the city. A long, long time ago the king thought this was a good place to build the capital city, so they built the capital city there. In the years that followed, the many kings still thought this was a good place for them, so this city is an ancient city; from there you can know about ancient China. First, I am going to tell you the ancient building Tiananmen Square.

Tiananmen Square is in the center of Beijing. It was built 800 years ago. It is very beautiful; it has the golden roof and red walls. It is about three stories tall, but has just two floors, five big arched doors on the first floor, the middle one is biggest. There are many sculptures near Tiananmen Square. In front of Tiananmen Square is Tiananmen Plaza. This is the biggest plaza in the world. There can be up to 400,000 people celebrating there. Tiananmen Square is a majestic building.

Behind Tiananmen Square is the Forbidden City, but itís not very near; you need to walk about ten minutes. After walking for a while, you will see a river surrounding a very long wall. Inside the wall is the Forbidden City. ìThe Forbidden City?î Maybe you feel strange about the name; maybe you will ask me, ìCan I go to the Forbidden City?î Of course you can, but fifty years ago, you couldnít. This is a place where the king and his family live, and it is also a place for his government workís place. The Forbidden City was built 800 years ago. It occupies 720,000 square meters. It has 9,999 beautiful rooms that make up this city-within-a-city, so itís named the Forbidden City. The reason why Forbidden City has only 9,999 rooms, and not 10,000 is because in China, 9 is a lucky number. It means ìlongî; the king wanted a long life and to have power for a long time. The Forbidden Cityís main colors are red and gold; it has red walls, and the gold roof. In China, the color gold means rich and red means luck. The Forbidden City has a lot of sculptures of dragons and phoenixes. The dragon is like the king, and the phoenix is like the queen. The Forbidden City has many, many precious antiques; they are very beautiful. The Forbidden City is very beautiful and majestic. Every day, there are 100,000 people who travel here. They are take a lot of pictures there to create a wonderful lifetime memory.

Finally, I will tell you about the Great Wall. The Great Wall is really majestic ancient structure. It was built 2000 years ago. The Great Wall is on the mountain ranges. It crosses five provinces, and about 6500 kilometers long. It is the only man-made structure you see it from the moon. We are very proud about it. The ancient people used it for war. One famous person said: ìIf you can go to the Great Wall, you will be a success.î It means that 2000 years ago, ancient people were able to build the Great Wall, so why canít you make some great things? Therefore, many, many people travel to the Great Wall. Even if they canít be successful, they can admire the majestic Great Wall.

Now, I think you know some things about Beijing, but I havenít told about all the beautiful places in Beijing yet. I want to keep something in case you have time to travel the Beijing; you will be surprised. I love Beijing very much. I hope you will like it, too.

11 Mart 2010 Perşembe

Traveling

Traveling from any place to place is very calming for people ,I think when you see many different things, there you learn a lot of new information.However only people don't travel for calming.Some factors determine why people travel to different places.


People works a lot througt all year , and want to rest.To relieve they sometimes preper to travelling.To rest is important for people.Whatever happen , travel.Because when they travel another places they relax and works harder next year.By relaxing , they become happier and this happiness reflects their surroundings
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Travelling sometimes is compulsory for people.For excample due to their job they have to leave from their house.Because they must continune thier lives without another people's help they have to earn money.Some people travel to earn money or progress in their job.For example seminar arranged for carreer.People who want to raise in their job go to there,so they have a lot of information about their job.Sometimes they take a certificate from this seminars and so they ar accepted easily by many company, because they are more ahead than other people.


To some up generally people travel because of these factories.I think traveling is not hard for you if you want to reach your aim.

10 Mart 2010 Çarşamba

ORDU AND DENİZLİ

I have been to many cities but I didin't enjoy those places as I enjoyed Ordu and Denizli.They are two cities that people get accustomed to their cities and their lives.I love both cities in different ways.Altough they are completely different from each other, there are some similarities between them.


Ordu has many properties and thanks to these properties Ordu seperates from Denizli. Firstly, it has sea that you charm with wonderful blue colour.It is sometimes quite sometimes ill-tempered.This ill-tempered affects Ordu's people.We hear that people of The Black Sea are very quick tempered, but thanks to unique beauty of the forests this bad temper decreases.Magnificent harmony of blue and green relieves people. Ordu is a city which is sat in the middle of The Black Sea Region, and it's climate is more different than Denizli.Due to its climate vegetables and fruits are not the same as Denizli's, because Ordu's weather is rainy vegetables and fruits which are grown by people like water, such as nut and tea. Also, climate affects houses.For example, houses are made from board in Ordu but denizli's houses are made from concrete.Due to landforms, transportation is hard. Thanks to passages, transportion's hardness decreases. Ordu is a small city and its some opportunities aren't enough.Finding o job is very hard. Ordu is not ideal for people who like entertainment.Finally, Ordu has a song.Everybody knows this song (Ordu's streams).This song and their accent is known by everyone.


Besides all these differences , Ordu and Denizli have some common properties. Firstly, both of them have universities.Thanks to these universities there are a lot of students in Ordu and Denizli.Ordu has some shopping malls like Denizli.People go to there for some reasons such as passing time, but both of them aren't cheap unfortunately.


Shortly, it is beautiful to see different places.These places can sometimes be similar and sometimes different.They are very different in appearance and culture,but in both places people adopt their lives.

MARRYING A FOREIGN PERSON

Is it logical maryying someone from another country? You think this king of marriage sounds different and exciting,but everything is different for you .If you don't adopt his/her country, your life is affected very badly.


Adopting any place is not easy for every person.Because you see many different things there when you compare it to your contry.For instance, traditions and customs are different.In our country you mustn't enter with shoes to your house.If you make so, people don't think about you well.In contrast, people can enter their house with their shoes in a foreign country.For them it is no problem.In another example ; when you see your friends or acquaintance you kiss him/her. The kissing stands for friendship between people.On the contrary,for them the kissing is not necessary in foreign country.However, some people say that marrying a foreign person is possible.They think that only love is enough,and if he/she wants to live his/her loved one, he/she struggles for everything.I don't think so because marrying is a hard institution. In addition to love some things are necessary like harmony of culture.


In summarise, harmony of culture and communication between people is very important.If you don't adopt his/her country you feel lonely only for love, we shouldn't make false things.

25 Şubat 2010 Perşembe

A CHARMING PLACE (revised )

I like discovering new places. When I go to the different places, I feel myself like refreshing.I went to many cafes and none is as good as Çay Bahane.


The best place to go is Çay Bahane.When you see at first side you charm definetely.With big and magnificent door,it welcomes you.You feel as if you came a palace.Outside of it affects you.Harmony of many colors reflects beauty of inside.When you enter there you firstly see many authentic tables.A wide atmosphere relieve you.With a beautiful song and nice conversation, tih cafe is irrestible for you.There are some soft matresses sides of the table.If you don't want to sit on , these matresses are an alternative for you.Costs are not very cheap but this cafe deserves.The most popular drink is Çipçop which smells very beautiful and it tastes delicious,too. People wait for it but the wait is worth it.

Different places are oppotunities to learn new things.You feel happy but Çay Bahane is the best among them.You should go there if you go to İzmir.